Here are the amendments for your video:
35 secs: Change music to Music or MUSIC
49 secs: Change drama to Drama or DRAMA
56 secs: Professional - check your spelling
2:06: SEIZE the day - Decide if you want 'Seize the Day' or 'SEIZE THE DAY'
2:14: Professional
2:49: British Oscar Nominated Actress
2:53: Pirates of the Caribbean
3:18: Nottingham - You've had a bit of a typo!
3:34: BBC needs to be in capitals and 'attributes' isn't the word you want. Try 'remnants'
4:17 It should say 'Let's celebrate'
The video is brilliant - great choice of clips and editing. Well done! Tweet when you have completed it and I will download it.
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